Okay, I just read this over again, and it sounds kind of mean/harsh. I swear I don't mean it to be!!! It doesn't really even hugely apply right now, I'm just mentioning it because it's one of my biggest business pet peeves, ya know? Feel free to tell me to shove it - haha!
I'm kind of a stickler for spelling and grammar type stuff in businesses. Maybe I don't 100% succeed myself (I'm not too good at spelling, but I do try to double and triple check), but I know when I'm looking at others things, I tend to feel like "If she didn't take the time to edit / type well then I wonder how much effort she'll put into the item." Obviously you've put a lot of time into this already, and I know you and you'd never make or sell anything underquality. I'd just hate for someone to feel that way because of silly things like lack of capitalization (which is really the only thing I see right now that kind of bothers me in a customer type way... if that makes sense).